contrast about house
i) Introduction
Mr Yap is a worker of Inti International University. He just married with his wife Ms Lee past years ago. In this few years Ms yap has helped Mr yap born 2 babies. Due to the house spaces is becoming small, Mr yap has decided to buy a new house near by his working place. They are 3 issues that Mr yap must be considered.
ii) Topic Sentence 1
He has to consider about the price of both houses whether he can afford it or not.
Supporting Detail 1
In Taman Jaya area is an affordable houses which will not burden him. RM250000
Supporting Detail 2
In Taman Aman area have a house that can fulfill Mr yap personal needs, but the prices is very expensive. Rm 350000
iii) Topic Sentence 2
He has to consider the needs of both houses towards himself and his family.
Supporting Detail 1
Most of the houses in Taman Jaya have 4 sleeping room 3 bath rooms , it is enough for Mr yap families.
Supporting Detail 2
Most of the houses in Taman Aman are Bangalore, have 6 sleeping room, 4 bath room. Mr yap will feel very waste that because they are only 4 members in his families.
iv) Topic Sentence 3
Mr yap have considered the distance from his house to work place.
Supporting Detail 1
Taman Jaya is nearby Inti International University.
Supporting Detail 2
Taman Aman is far then Taman Jaya.
v) Conclusion
After considering all the benefits and the weakness of both houses , Mr Yap has decided to choose the Taman Jaya area's house as his new residents. This is because he has put his family member priority when buying the house.
ok.but please look at your subject verb agreement ya.
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