Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Illustrative essay (outline)

Everyone is the same, we only have 365 days in a year ,30days, and 24 hours in a day. Even the richest man or the most successful man have the same amount of days and times with us. But they can manage their time well and do things in time while the ones that always complains that they do not have enough time to finish a specific task in a limited time is because they always procrastinates. The best example are student always procrastinate their assignment, revision and put off the time to prepare their presentation.

paragraph1
Topic sentence-Students  always procrastinate their assignment given by lecturer.
-The time given by lecturer to finish an assignment is usually two to three weeks time.
-Assignment that is given, students always forget when they reach their room because they have mood of still -got time.
-affected by friend.
In conclusion, when the assignment is done around the deadline, even though students  manage finish it, but
the assignment will be lack of information and can't get high marks.

paragraph2
Topic sentence-Students will only do their revision for test when the test is nearly.
-students waste a lot of time to play online games, shopping and so on.
-give excuses such as, not yet test, no mood and so on.
-when the test is tomorrow, they will say not enough time, because they only do their revision the day before
  night.
In conclution, when the result is bad,after the lecturer giving back to students, they will get lower marks and try to blame lecturer about their lecture skills is bad.

Paragraph 3
Topic sentence-students will only do their preparation for presentation when the presentation day is coming  
                       soon.
-lack of information in power point
-speaking skills is very bad , due to lack of practice
-students will simply do the slide show.
In conclusion, students can't answer what lecturer are asking the question.

Finally,students must manage their time wisely, they can do a time table for their daily activity. They should have enough determination to follow the time table.Students must do their assignment time by time, do revision every day if possible, and prepare for the presentation.

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